Talk:Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter/Archive 1

Archive 1

"The science payload will include..." -- this describes Mars Science Laboratory paylod rather than Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter payload. This section should be moved to Mars Science Laboratory where it belongs. Mdrejhon 07:03, 17 Aug 2004 (UTC)

Copyright Violation Tag

Copyright Violation Tag placed on 19:18, 26 Jan 2005 by 12.222.161.185

Replacement page written

Hi, I've written a comprehensive (many sections) stub (mostly incomplete) replacement for the copyright infringing original in Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter/Temp. I've had a look through that pages history, and it looks like it was doomed from the start. I would like it if this replaced Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter, and any original prose that is missed (and is not copyrighted elsewhere ;-) ) can be added back in later.

It seems there was no copyright infringement in the original article. The two articles (original and Temp) have now been merged. -- Curps 07:44, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Remove Copyright Violation Tag, Transferred Temp to Original!

It’s been 2 weeks now and nothing has been done about it, so why not just remove the offending material (who ever wrote it if you want it back take it up with a system op) and place the temp page in its place. That tag is an eye sore and slows access to the non-copied material. The temp page can be made into a redirect until (someday) an op deletes it. --BerserkerBen 18:54, 18 Feb 2005 (UTC)

After reading though the deletion policy I have called for a vote to delete this page as a copyright infringement and to replace it with its temp. Votes_for_deletion/Mars_Reconnaissance_Orbiter

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The vote is now moot, since there was no copyright infringement after all and the two versions (original and Temp) have been merged. -- Curps 07:45, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

After much complaining on my part the copyright tag has been remove, after Curps call for merger, I merged the text from the temp article with the original and Jni(?) deleted temp article.--BerserkerBen 16:51, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Yes, I had a look at the cited 'copied' article, and couldn't find any exactly copied passages, except for the quoted text (not an infringement). I'd like to see the quote from the Mission manager gone, it isn't wiki-ish. JamesHoadley 09:36, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I have no problem with the quote being removed. --BerserkerBen 13:14, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Copyright: Don't Just Copy from the NASA site All NASA material fine

I had to rewrite the MCS sub-subsection, it was copied.

Version before I rewrote: [1]

NASA page on MCS: [2]

This page has already been suspended for copyright violation in Jan 05. JamesHoadley 19:23, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Aren't NASA pages public domain? The last copyvio was from www.space.com I think. --Bricktop 21:15, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I thought the same: All NASA publications - images or text - are public domain. Is this incorrect? Awolf002 21:38, 17 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I might be wrong, images are certainly in the public domain, I thought website text wasn't. I was thinking the last copyvio was from NASA material, but you're right Bricktop... I think we can copy stuff from the website. Sorry for going off. I think that subsection is better rewritten anyway, there was some confusion in there about the filters. JamesHoadley 17:29, 18 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I just thought I'd update the heading, it used to sound a bit scary and was factually incorrect. JamesHoadley 16:42, 9 August 2005 (UTC)

Each solar panel has an area of approximately 10 metres square (100 m² or 1100 ft²)

I don't quite follow this sentence - how can 10 metres square be equal to 100m²? Does it mean a 10m by 10m square? If so, I feel this should be clarified. – drw25 (talk) 12:03, 11 August 2005 (UTC)

10 square metres is 10 1x1 metre squares, 10 metres squared is an area 10x10 metres. I haven't fact checked this beyond that, it's just something I know about square metres/metres square(d). 58.104.40.137 14:42, 13 August 2005 (UTC) JamesHoadley (not logged in)

I would think that "10 metres square" should be changed to "10 square metres" if the area is equal to ten panels where each panel is a square and each side of a square is one metre in length. Also, why "metre" and not "meter"?

Because metre is the proper spelling. Except for the Websterites (Americans, mostly). :-)

Urhixidur 18:31, 2005 August 15 (UTC)

NASA built it using meters, not metres. News flows out of the program in "meters" and those studying engineering in America use "meters". Won't the audience of this article expect "meters"? 4.248.221.67

Looks like someone has updated the article to say the solar panels are 5.35 × 2.53 m. Just to put out any fires, the rule with spelling variations (colour/color,metre/meter) is that it should follow what the original article writer did. In this case we're using US spellings. I used metres here because that's how I spell it, it doesn't matter on the chat page. JamesHoadley

Update, it looks like Gene Nygaard has changed it from it's mixed state of US/British spellings to all US spelling. One should be careful with this sort of thing, just because it is a US mission doesn't mean that the article has to be spelt that way. JamesHoadley 00:54, 16 August 2005 (UTC)

Actually, what you state is not the rule at all; that first contributor is a "last resort" rule, and furthermore the rule doesn't apply on a word-by-word basis; it applies on an article-by-article basis. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style#National varieties of English.

This is an American project, and should follow American English.

Even on that last resort rule ("If all else fails,...", you lose. It is the "first major contributor (that is, not a stub)" whose usage sets the tone for the article in that case. For this article, that is User:AlexPlank, using "meters". Gene Nygaard 02:51, 16 August 2005 (UTC)

Agreed, US spelling is correct for this article. JamesHoadley 09:11, 16 August 2005 (UTC)

Timelines

The "active" timeline (name could be changed if someone comes up a better one) is a timeline of events that occur, the "mission" timeline is a timeline of things that are suppose to occur. My question is how should events that have occurred be used to rewrite the mission time line? Should the mission timeline be left the way it is (future tense), or should events that have occurred be change to past tense? If the event that occurs is not exactly the same as it is planned then that should be taken into account to.

Generally the things that have now occurred should be turned into past tense. Some thought should go into it though, eg, "Four trajectory correction maneuvers are planned" should be turned into "On date XX-MM-2005 the third and final trajectory correction maneuver was performed. The mission plan allowed for four, but only three were needed. Mission principal PersonA said that the interplanetary burn went exceedingly well". That sort of thing.

So don't just rote turn past into future, try to tie things together and think about it as a piece of writing. Some details can be dropped, but generally they shouldn't, the number of planned corrections is as important as the number of actual corrections, and it puts the number of corrections in context. Thanks for bringing this up. JamesHoadley 01:39, 14 August 2005 (UTC)

After some thought and the above comments I think higher details but limited scope should be in the active timeline when they occur, while less detail but wider scope is placed in the mission time line, so with the above example it would be "4 trajectory correction maneuver were planed, but only 3 deemed needed after all. A "5th" trajectory correction maneuver is also optional within the last hours before orbital insertion for emergency purposes"; while the active time line says: "On date XX-MM-2005 the third and final trajectory correction maneuver was performed. The mission plan..." Note the above mission timeline example incorporates both past tense events and future tense events. The mission timeline will provide wider picture details of what was planed and what happened, while the active timeline will provide in-depth details of specific events, such as when the orbiter blows up (knock on wood).--BerserkerBen 04:35, 14 August 2005 (UTC)

Mars is apparently closer than we think

Here's another reason not to copy directly from NASA's Mars Program website, from "Rich Zurek and the Mystery of the Disappearing Spacecraft"[3] (12 April 2005):

In 1999, the U.S. sent Mars Polar Lander, but it too never made it successfully to the surface. In fact, two-thirds of all international missions to the red planet have failed. It isn't trivial getting spacecraft safely to a planet that is hundreds of thousands of miles away, and solving some of the mysteries surrounding those that were lost will help future missions be successful. [emphasis mine]

Did anyone else realize that Mars moved from being about 40 million miles away to something approximating the orbit of the Moon? I think I understand now why two-thirds of the missions fail. What bothers me most about this is not only did the unnamed author write a full 3-word phrase ("hundreds of thousands") which is hard to imagine as a single typo, but nobody caught this in proofreading (assuming they even have proofreaders). It looks to me like the decaying state of the U.S. educational system is affecting even our elite science projects. ~ Jeff Q (talk) 18:00, 12 August 2005 (UTC)

Oh well. Still technically correct, 40Mmiles = 400 x 100000 miles, so plural hundreds of thousands of miles is correct. It's a literary "feel" sort of thing, so perhaps they decided that millions of miles away sounds beyond the reach of humans, but hundreds of thousands of miles is big, but definitely within the reach of humans (which is NASA's current major goal). Then again maybe they should be just shot and their family disgraced. Just joking. 58.104.40.137 14:48, 13 August 2005 (UTC) JamesHoadley (not logged in)

Maybe NASA thinks the American public is too stupid to understand big numbers. (And maybe they're right; consider the recent juror who refused to convict based on DNA evidence that had something like a 1 in 10 billion chance of being wrong — I bet she plays the lottery every week.) I guess I should be grateful they didn't say "so far away it would take lots and lots of fingers to count all the miles". But it doesn't bode well for using NASA as an authoritative source for its own subject area. ~ Jeff Q (talk) 19:59, 13 August 2005 (UTC)

Countdown

Ok I think that is going just a little to far! Talk about a huge waste of space when you have 100 of these listed: "Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter was only xxx million kilometers away from Mars at 200x-xxx-xx xx:xx:xx UTC." Lets stick with the active timeline, maybe you can integrate distances in there, but please stick with logarithmic numbers such as .1,1,10,100 million, to save space.

OK, I'm moving them to the talk page, to save space. — Yaohua2000 06:26, 1 September 2005 (UTC)

Ephemeris revised on August 16 2005

*******************************************************************************
 Revised: Aug 16, 2005    Mars Reconnaisance Orbiter (MRO)  / (Sun)         -74
                            http://marsprogram.jpl.nasa.gov/mro/

 LAUNCH DATE:                                                MARS ARRIVAL DATE:
  Aug 12, 2005 (it's up and away)                              March 10, 2006

 NOTE:          AUG 11 LAUNCH SCRUBBED (fueling sensors)
       ORIGINAL AUG 10 LAUNCH SCRUBBED (gyros)

 LAUNCH VEHICLE:
  Atlas V two-stage

 BACKGROUND:
  MRO will aerobrake for 6 months from the post-insertion 35 hour orbit, saving
  450 kg of fuel. Primary science phase starts in November of 2006 and operate
  for 2 Earth years from a 112 minute, near circular polar orbit.

 SPACECRAFT PHYSICAL PROPERTIES:
  Height=  6.5 m                          Solar panels =   20 m^2
  Width = 13.6 m (tip-to-tip)             launch weight= 2180 kg

 SPACECRAFT TRAJECTORY:
  Trajectory file "nav001_050812_051013_p-v1" released Aug 13.
*******************************************************************************

Instantaneous distance between Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter and Mars
Range (km)	Orbiter UTC	Range (km)	Orbiter UTC	Range (km)	Orbiter UTC
100 000 000	2005-Aug-25 15:19:32	99 000 000	2005-Aug-26 13:35:17	98 000 000	2005-Aug-27 11:56:05
97 000 000	2005-Aug-28 10:22:04	96 000 000	2005-Aug-29 08:53:29	95 000 000	2005-Aug-30 07:30:40
94 000 000	2005-Aug-31 06:13:53	93 000 000	2005-Sep-01 05:03:24	92 000 000	2005-Sep-02 03:59:30
91 000 000	2005-Sep-03 03:02:27	90 000 000	2005-Sep-04 02:12:33	89 000 000	2005-Sep-05 01:30:06
88 000 000	2005-Sep-06 00:55:25	87 000 000	2005-Sep-07 00:28:48	86 000 000	2005-Sep-08 00:10:35
85 000 000	2005-Sep-09 00:01:06	84 000 000	2005-Sep-10 00:00:43	83 000 000	2005-Sep-11 00:09:46
82 000 000	2005-Sep-12 00:28:39	81 000 000	2005-Sep-13 00:57:45	80 000 000	2005-Sep-14 01:37:26
79 000 000	2005-Sep-15 02:28:08	78 000 000	2005-Sep-16 03:30:16	77 000 000	2005-Sep-17 04:44:18
76 000 000	2005-Sep-18 06:10:40	75 000 000	2005-Sep-19 07:49:51	74 000 000	2005-Sep-20 09:42:21
73 000 000	2005-Sep-21 11:48:41	72 000 000	2005-Sep-22 14:09:22	71 000 000	2005-Sep-23 16:44:58
70 000 000	2005-Sep-24 19:36:05	69 000 000	2005-Sep-25 22:43:18	68 000 000	2005-Sep-27 02:07:15
67 000 000	2005-Sep-28 05:48:37	66 000 000	2005-Sep-29 09:48:03	65 000 000	2005-Sep-30 14:06:19
64 000 000	2005-Oct-01 18:44:09	63 000 000	2005-Oct-02 23:42:20	62 000 000	2005-Oct-04 05:01:43
61 000 000	2005-Oct-05 10:43:11	60 000 000	2005-Oct-06 16:47:37	59 000 000	2005-Oct-07 23:16:00
58 000 000	2005-Oct-09 06:09:21	57 000 000	2005-Oct-10 13:28:44	56 000 000	2005-Oct-11 21:15:17

Ephemeris revised on October 13 2005

*******************************************************************************
 Revised: Oct 13, 2005    Mars Reconnaisance Orbiter (MRO)  / (Sun)         -74
                            http://marsprogram.jpl.nasa.gov/mro/

 LAUNCH DATE:                                                MARS ARRIVAL DATE:
  Aug 12, 2005 (it's up and away)                              March 10, 2006

 NOTE:          AUG 11 LAUNCH SCRUBBED (fueling sensors)
       ORIGINAL AUG 10 LAUNCH SCRUBBED (gyros)

 LAUNCH VEHICLE:
  Atlas V two-stage

 BACKGROUND:
  MRO will aerobrake for 6 months from the post-insertion 35 hour orbit, saving
  450 kg of fuel. Primary science phase starts in November of 2006 and operate
  for 2 Earth years from a 112 minute, near circular polar orbit.

 SPACECRAFT PHYSICAL PROPERTIES:
  Height=  6.5 m                          Solar panels =   20 m^2
  Width = 13.6 m (tip-to-tip)             launch weight= 2180 kg

 SPACECRAFT TRAJECTORY:

  Trajectory files (concatenated):       Start                          End
  -------------------------------------  ------------------------   -----------------
   pfile_OD003                           2005 AUG 12 12:41:55.862   2005-Aug-12 13:20
   MRO_p_c_ref-od010_050812_060401_p-v1  2005-Aug-12 13:20          2006-Mar-12 00:00

  Includes predicted TCM-2 maneuver on 2005-Nov-11 and MOI on 2006-Mar-10, but
  no aerobraking maneuvers thereafter.
*******************************************************************************

Instantaneous distance between Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter and Mars
Range (km)	Orbiter UTC	Range (km)	Orbiter UTC	Range (km)	Orbiter UTC
100 000 000	2005-Aug-25 15:19:31	99 000 000	2005-Aug-26 13:35:17	98 000 000	2005-Aug-27 11:56:05
97 000 000	2005-Aug-28 10:22:04	96 000 000	2005-Aug-29 08:53:30	95 000 000	2005-Aug-30 07:30:41
94 000 000	2005-Aug-31 06:13:55	93 000 000	2005-Sep-01 05:03:27	92 000 000	2005-Sep-02 03:59:34
91 000 000	2005-Sep-03 03:02:32	90 000 000	2005-Sep-04 02:12:39	89 000 000	2005-Sep-05 01:30:13
88 000 000	2005-Sep-06 00:55:32	87 000 000	2005-Sep-07 00:28:56	86 000 000	2005-Sep-08 00:10:44
85 000 000	2005-Sep-09 00:01:16	84 000 000	2005-Sep-10 00:00:54	83 000 000	2005-Sep-11 00:09:59
82 000 000	2005-Sep-12 00:28:53	81 000 000	2005-Sep-13 00:57:59	80 000 000	2005-Sep-14 01:37:41
79 000 000	2005-Sep-15 02:28:24	78 000 000	2005-Sep-16 03:30:34	77 000 000	2005-Sep-17 04:44:37
76 000 000	2005-Sep-18 06:11:00	75 000 000	2005-Sep-19 07:50:13	74 000 000	2005-Sep-20 09:42:44
73 000 000	2005-Sep-21 11:49:05	72 000 000	2005-Sep-22 14:09:47	71 000 000	2005-Sep-23 16:45:25
70 000 000	2005-Sep-24 19:36:33	69 000 000	2005-Sep-25 22:43:48	68 000 000	2005-Sep-27 02:07:47
67 000 000	2005-Sep-28 05:49:10	66 000 000	2005-Sep-29 09:48:38	65 000 000	2005-Sep-30 14:06:56
64 000 000	2005-Oct-01 18:44:48	63 000 000	2005-Oct-02 23:43:01	62 000 000	2005-Oct-04 05:02:26
61 000 000	2005-Oct-05 10:43:56	60 000 000	2005-Oct-06 16:48:25	59 000 000	2005-Oct-07 23:16:50
58 000 000	2005-Oct-09 06:10:14	57 000 000	2005-Oct-10 13:29:40	56 000 000	2005-Oct-11 21:16:15
55 000 000	2005-Oct-13 05:31:12	54 000 000	2005-Oct-14 14:15:45	53 000 000	2005-Oct-15 23:31:14
52 000 000	2005-Oct-17 09:19:04	51 000 000	2005-Oct-18 19:40:43	50 000 000	2005-Oct-20 06:37:46
49 000 000	2005-Oct-21 18:11:53	48 000 000	2005-Oct-23 06:24:50	47 000 000	2005-Oct-24 19:18:31
46 000 000	2005-Oct-26 08:54:54	45 000 000	2005-Oct-27 23:16:08	44 000 000	2005-Oct-29 14:24:28
43 000 000	2005-Oct-31 06:22:18	42 000 000	2005-Nov-01 23:12:11	41 000 000	2005-Nov-03 16:56:51
40 000 000	2005-Nov-05 11:39:11	39 000 000	2005-Nov-07 07:22:17	38 000 000	2005-Nov-09 04:09:23
37 000 000	2005-Nov-11 02:04:01	36 000 000	2005-Nov-13 01:09:50	35 000 000	2005-Nov-15 01:30:45
34 000 000	2005-Nov-17 03:10:54	33 000 000	2005-Nov-19 06:14:25	32 000 000	2005-Nov-21 10:45:55
31 000 000	2005-Nov-23 16:50:18	30 000 000	2005-Nov-26 00:32:30	29 000 000	2005-Nov-28 09:57:37
28 000 000	2005-Nov-30 21:10:49	27 000 000	2005-Dec-03 10:17:18	26 000 000	2005-Dec-06 01:22:12
25 000 000	2005-Dec-08 18:30:29	24 000 000	2005-Dec-11 13:46:46	23 000 000	2005-Dec-14 11:15:12
22 000 000	2005-Dec-17 10:59:12	21 000 000	2005-Dec-20 13:01:19	20 000 000	2005-Dec-23 17:22:56
19 000 000	2005-Dec-27 00:04:01	18 000 000	2005-Dec-30 09:03:01	17 000 000	2006-Jan-02 20:16:33
16 000 000	2006-Jan-06 09:39:29	15 000 000	2006-Jan-10 01:04:48	14 000 000	2006-Jan-13 18:23:50
13 000 000	2006-Jan-17 13:26:23	12 000 000	2006-Jan-21 10:01:12	11 000 000	2006-Jan-25 07:56:17
10 000 000	2006-Jan-29 06:59:24	9 000 000	2006-Feb-02 06:58:31	8 000 000	2006-Feb-06 07:42:13
7 000 000	2006-Feb-10 09:00:01	6 000 000	2006-Feb-14 10:42:35	5 000 000	2006-Feb-18 12:41:54
4 000 000	2006-Feb-22 14:51:15	3 000 000	2006-Feb-26 17:04:59	2 000 000	2006-Mar-02 19:17:59
1 000 000	2006-Mar-06 21:22:47	900 000	2006-Mar-07 07:10:09	800 000	2006-Mar-07 16:57:08
700 000	2006-Mar-08 02:43:37	600 000	2006-Mar-08 12:29:28	500 000	2006-Mar-08 22:14:28
400 000	2006-Mar-09 07:58:14	300 000	2006-Mar-09 17:40:04	200 000	2006-Mar-10 03:18:30
100 000	2006-Mar-10 12:49:03	90 000	2006-Mar-10 13:45:11	80 000	2006-Mar-10 14:41:01
70 000	2006-Mar-10 15:36:29	60 000	2006-Mar-10 16:31:30	50 000	2006-Mar-10 17:25:55
40 000	2006-Mar-10 18:19:34	30 000	2006-Mar-10 19:12:06	20 000	2006-Mar-10 20:03:03
10 000	2006-Mar-10 20:51:45	9 000	2006-Mar-10 20:56:32	8 000	2006-Mar-10 21:01:21
7 000	2006-Mar-10 21:06:14	6 000	2006-Mar-10 21:11:19	5 000	2006-Mar-10 21:16:56
4 000	2006-Mar-10 21:24:45	3 709	2006-Mar-10 21:31:20

Ooh, halfway there. JamesHoadley 10:33, 25 October 2005 (UTC)

A little more than two-thirds the way there! Is it me, or does the fact that it seems that it being only halfway through with its travel is a little contradictory? We are four months into the trip and we have four months left. It seems that way, but then of course MRO has to decelerate or else it'll miss Mars altogether! It also has a couple of course corrections. Just a few of my thoughts. --Marsbound2024 03:35, 19 November 2005 (UTC)

Yeah, it will lose velocity as it travels away from the sun to Mars (exchangine Kinetic for Potential energy). I've never thought about that before. The course correction burns are just nudges, it's effectively in orbit until it gets to Mars. The orbit insertion burn (if there is one) and aerobraking puts an end to that nice Newtonian physics stuff. JamesHoadley 10:27, 19 November 2005 (UTC)

Less than 10,000,000 kilometers remaining. Time to start photographing Mars I think. After all, they did photograph the Moon from this distance during calibration. Look forward to orbit insertion. Marsbound2024 04:12, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

Just to be safe, notes

Would anybody oppose a conversion to the Cites.php refs format? Circeus 20:03, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

Well, did it, if anybody disagrees, feel free to revert. Circeus 20:12, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

Much better, is this going to be put into a robot? JamesHoadley 05:05, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Secondary Mission Timeline

Has anyone researched the MRO secondary mission as a communications relay?

After its primary mission, MRO is expected to spend two years as a communications relay between Earth and future spacecraft, like NASA's planned Phoenix lander in 2008 and the Mars Science Laboratory rover in 2010. Space.com

--jwalling 03:42, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Article is getting rather large

I would suggest pulling out some of the sections on the instruments and creating specific articles for them, just to spread the love around. For example, the HiRES camera could then be placed in the Category:Space cameras--Hooperbloob 19:27, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

I disagree on your proposed solution, we need a lot more structure than merely linking stuff through categories. I think the scientific instrumentation section should be split off into its own article named Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter instruments (or something) and then linked to from this page. Of course, it could also be in whatever category exists for space instruments (and a lot of the instruments onboard MRO aren't cameras, by the way), but its connection to the main MRO article needs to remain very explicit. --Cyde Weys 19:33, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Sounds good, I'll buy that solution--Hooperbloob 19:41, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Okay, now be bold! (You proposed it, now you get to implement it.) --Cyde Weys 19:43, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Well I don't like the idea, but I don't see any other solution to the problem then to split up the article. Perhaps This article could be a overview of the mission, Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter Instruments for the technical data on the instruments and Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter Spacecraft for the space probe's structure and technical components. So that means moving out the mostly everything under Mars_Reconnaissance_Orbiter#Instrumentation to a new article and mostly everything under Mars_Reconnaissance_Orbiter#Engineering_data to another. Ah, I just don't like it but if everyone thinks it should be done then lets do it, I will put a tag up for spliting though I think we should get more input on this. --BerserkerBen 21:19, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

A summary of the instrumentation should still remain the article. The child article could be linked in that section as {{main|Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter Instruments}}. Same with other sections. Just my 2c. - Ganeshk (talk) 21:29, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

No, the article should not be split into two. The current article should stay where it is and not be moved to a specific spacecraft article. What is suggested is merely that the instruments be turned into a sub-article and linked using {{main}}. --Cyde Weys 07:03, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

I also oppose a move. I see no point in a separate article for the instruments of the Orbiter. Maybe you could split the article into one about the Orbiter itself and the other about the mission it is supposed to carry out, but an article for its instruments is unnecessary. --Revolución hablar ver 00:53, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

Oppose. The article is big, but we should only think about it when it gets to ~60kB (I think the official warning limit is 32kB for old versions of Netscape). Plenty of featured articles are bigger. On another point, HiRISE isn't really a space telescope, space telescopes are pointed to other bodies, cameras are taken to their bodies for study. For instance, Cassini's Narrow Angle Camera is a big reflecting telescope, but is designed to look at Saturn. --JamesHoadley 04:15, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

Literally though a space telescope is a telescope in space. Doesn't matter what it's pointing at :-P Cyde Weys 07:03, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

Well, literally all lenses, cameras and telescopes are telescopes, literally there are only microscopes and telescopes. I guess I think of the difference between cameras and telescopes as what I wrote above (telescopes aren't brought up to their target), but maybe you could find some other definition. I think they're calling it a telescope to emphasise its size. -- JamesHoadley 08:42, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

How do I cite NASA TV?

I added info from my DVR recording of NASA TV's coverage of the orbital insertion (coverage of control room at JPL and audio of control room engineers and staff) and NASA TV's coverage of the post-orbital insertion press conference. JamesHoadley was asking that I reference that, but how? I can't find a transcript anywhere online of mission control or the press conference. I’m not even sure what reference type it qualifies as (Engineer N/A said this… ?). Spaceflightnow.com Mission Statues Center MRO As some of the information I guess I can cite that? If anyone can help that would be appreciated.--BerserkerBen 21:00, 14 March 2006 (UTC)

Just cite the TV. It doesn't look like there's specific advice on how to cite TV (see WP:Cite and Wikipedia:Template_messages/Sources_of_articles/Generic_citations). I think you should cite the TV because it has more specific info (the temperature). Even though it has no web link, it's still verifyable (just more painfully!), so you should use it. --JamesHoadley 01:12, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

Featured article?

Anyone think this article is ready to nominated for Featured article status? -Ravedave 03:27, 16 March 2006 (UTC)]

It would be nice but I don't think it complies with rule 2.e. for featured article criteria as this is a current event and will change progressively over the next 6+ years with scientific discoveries made by it. Then again I don’t know much about feature article statues. --BerserkerBen 03:44, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

It seems rather inappropriate to have an article detailing a current event presented as an FAC, given that it can't be described as "stable". siafu 04:22, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

I think it could get there, if there was a consistant way of adding new events and discoveries. The event timelines seem to work, but I can't think of a good way to put in discoveries. The Mars Exploration Rover, Opportunity rover and Spirit rover articles became like bomb sites because of all the progress, dicoveries and images released from those. I'd like to know a way to stop that sort of thing from happening. For instance, when it starts imaging previous landers on Mars, people will add it like it's the most important thing about the mission, whereas it's really a sideline. Plus all the data and discoveries come in dribs and drabs, starting as images, then slower releases of radar data, early speculation, then publications and big news conferences. That sort of thing doesn't help a Wiki article.

Back to the FA thing, it shouldn't have too much stuff that's happening right now. For instance, the second paragraph is about the orbital insertion, and it's arguable that that paragraph should never have been there, it should be up to readers to find the section. It's a very small aspect of an encyclopedia article on the whole mission. If we have a sensible way of updating it FA candidature should be fine. --JamesHoadley 04:41, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

Well we could have a "discoveries" section place in or after "Science operations and extended mission" are you suggesting some rules and guidelines to adding information to that? --BerserkerBen 05:24, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

I'm not really sure how to keep it under control, and I don't think there's any good way of doing it, apart from maybe deleting minor stuff once it gets old, and lots of other things like it have been done. For instance, the first partial image of Olympus Mons might get into the article, but then if they release a bigger better version, we might just want to delete mention of the small image. JamesHoadley 11:20, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

I would recommend waiting till the aerobraking starts, wait a few weeks to settle down, and apply for featured. It's the period of time that's the most likely to be calm, with relatively few changes, as during the aerobraking phase, there's no new pictures, no new major news, etc. --Tuvas 16:22, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

Before we try for a Feature article we could try for a good article status, it makes a good start, but first we need to get the current event sticker off, I'm just going to go ahead and do that a nominate us for good article statues. --BerserkerBen 01:52, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

Some unsolicited advise from someone who has been there: I tagged this as a Good Article because it's comprehensive, well-referenced, illustrated and appears to be on its way to featured status. However, it is not yet Featured Article status primarily due to the prose. Don't worry about stability; now that it's in orbit, it's stable. Each of the bullet points and timeline items can and should be incorporated into the text and written as prose. For example, looking at the timeline, there are two items about the gyroscopes. The preceeding Launch section states "Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter launched on August 12, 2005." If you rewrite this to "After a two day delay related to concerns over the gyroscopes, the Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter launched on August 12, 2005." You killed two relatively insignificant timeline items and avoded having to twice mention that the Orbiter launched on August 12, 2005. The Instrumentation and Scientific instrumentation sections repeat themseves and there are way too many section headers in the latter (and don't bold any item unless it's a Wikipedia keyword that will lead directly to the article). My suggestion would be to delete all the headers except for Instrumentation at the top and then rewrite without any sub-headers. While headers help categorize materials, they can also be excuses to preserve poorly written prose that, without the header, are not readable. Headers come last, not first. I hope this is helpful and I really am looking forward to seeing this on the FAC page. Jtmichcock 13:40, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

current event tag

This will be a "current event" for the next several years, as the MRO will be still surveying the surface of Mars so I think it should be removed now that a week has passed since it enter's Mars's orbit. --Revolución hablar ver 01:10, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

agreed, the MER articles don't have a current event label. --BerserkerBen 01:31, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

Would this be a good info box?

It's based on Template:Mars_spacecraft, at the bottom of the article, but I think it would look good at the top and be more appropriate up there. I've edited it to be a bit narrower. JamesHoadley 04:54, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Infoboxes usually only have information about the subject itself. Then there are the subject templates that go at the bottom of the article. I think a spacecraft infobox would be a good idea though. LEts see what feilds would it have? Image, Name, Location, Distance travelled (?), launched by (NASA,,ESA etc), Official Site, Parent spacecraft (for landers?), Launch Date,Power (solar, neucular). Hrm I willmake a sampleone. Great idea!!! -Ravedave 05:19, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, you're right, this is probably inappropriate for an infobox, but it sure looks pretty! As for Template:Mars_spacecraft, it should be more horizontal so it looks like other "navigators". --JamesHoadley 21:02, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Infobox (2)

I created Template:Infobox spacecraft with basic parameters off the Mountain infobox. Should I change the colors? What are all the fields that should be in it? -Ravedave 05:34, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

I have updated it. These are my inital field ideas, once there is feedback they can be implemented. * == required:

   Infobox Spacecraft
   | Name* = Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter
   | Photo = Mars_Reconnaissance_Orbiter.jpg
   | Caption = Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter over Mars (conceptual drawing)
   | Location = Mars orbit
   | Creator* = NASA
   | LaunchDate = August 12, 2005
   | LaunchCraft = Atlas V-401	
   | ParentSpaceCraft = 
   | DistanceTraveled = 
   | Power = 2 Solar panels, 2000 watts
   | OrbitalInsertionDate = March 10, 2006
   | MissionCompletion = November 2008
   | Weight = 2,180 kg (4,806 lb)
   | TransmissionRate = 6 Mbit/s

{{Infobox spacecraft
| Name = Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter
| Photo = Mars_Reconnaissance_Orbiter.jpg
| Caption = Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter over Mars (conceptual drawing)
| Location = Mars orbit
| Creator = [[NASA]]
| LaunchDate = [[August 12]], [[2005]]
}}

There's already an infobox (Template:Spacecraft) floating around, but it's no good for a lot of missions, because it makes assumptions, like it has a single orbit and single target body, so maybe this could be expanded to accommodate different orbits and different flybys. It's used on Cassini-Huygens, but doesn't belong there. -JamesHoadley 21:29, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Excellent thanks. I will merge the two, and change the template to use "if" to include certain items. -Ravedave 02:21, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

Featured Article

The discussion was going around once about if we wanted to apply for featured article. We decided at the time that the best way to go about was to apply for a good article canidacy, and go from there. However, that has been some time ago, and I think we might have a shot at featured article again. Ideas? Tuvas 04:57, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

I totally disagree now, if we have to cut the article down so much to make it a FA then I'm against it (what ever that worth). There was plunty of intresting information lost in the most resent cut downs, also the layout looks very wrong now with everything looking messy and jumbled.--BerserkerBen 05:36, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

As near as I can tell, very little content itself was totally removed off of the page, although some of it was moved to other pages. Most of the rest of the changes were cosmetic, rewording a few things, adding citations, etc. As for things appearing to be jumbled, well, I'd like to hear what you'd like to see to change the layout. Tuvas 14:39, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

Cosmetic!?!?, what do you mean like making a good looking women look like a horror? Seriously the article looks awful now! There is a huge degradation from this [4] to the present article. Now there are some good points like the spacecraft table but that’s about it, what wrong with all the pictures? Why is HIRISE the only instrument worthy of its own title (let me guess its because someone that worked on HIRISE is putting in their own POV), what happened to the timelines, where did some of this information go, where are these other pages you speak of. Why is everything so crammed together, are you trying to fit it on printed text? This is wikipedia the supposed bastion of all human knowledge which implies removing any information is a sin, of course most people here just want this to be another Britannica or a site that purports what ever they find important and not much else, I don't agree with that but I unlike most here know I'm powerless and I don't have the persona to believe I’m right enough to boss people around, as such my complaints stand only as a objection and I don’t believe you or any of the others will change their activities because of it.--BerserkerBen 15:53, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

Okay, HiRISE getting it's own section was more due to the fact that there was more information on it than any of the other instruments, by quite a fair sum really. And, I would like to add, I had little to do with it, I've only been around here for the last 2 months, if you look back to HiRISE 2 months ago, you will notice that it still had the most information. Also, if you look at just any news report on MRO, HiRISE is given the spotlight more than any other instrument. If you don't beleive me, take a look at http://www.space.com/missionlaunches/mro_mars_story_archive.html , and count the number of references to HiRISE vrs to any other instrument. I personally don't see any need to cut HiRISE down any further than it is to place it with the other cameras, but, if I get the feeling that I am alone in this decision, I would willingly change it.

Now, let me also add that I do beleive that I can be subject to POV, I could very well be wrong. If you do see something you think was cut too much, feel free to mention what it was, and we can work to getting those parts back up to the same as it was before. I may seem like a tyrant, but, beleive me, I'm more than willing to work around other's ideas.

Also, I'm not seeing any images that were cut down, with the exception of 2 HiRISE images, which were moved to the HiRISE page. The Timelines went to the Timeline of the Mars Reconnaisance Orbiter page, there's a link to it clearly visible in the overview section.

The reason for the cuts were largely as follows. I was thinking, in a few years, what will really be important about this article. Anything that wasn't was either removed or moved to a different page. I mean, who really cares that Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter was 100 million kilometers away from Mars at August 25, 2005 15:19:32 UTC. Granted, when that first happened, it was news, but now? Also, anything that was covered in the article in a different place was either greatly summerized or eliminated.

The whole purpose to the changes was to make things easier to find, not make the article look so cluttered (Which it appeared with so many sub sections). Still, as I said before, I challenge you to find something noteworthy from the version of the article you linked that was removed from the current version, not including things that were moved to the HiRISE page or the MRO timeline page. Tuvas 16:53, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

Well you don't consider the timeline "note worthy" so I don't think we are even on the same frequency here. Another thing I think that one giant section is much more cluttered then many subsections, you don't. Many feel this is a encyclopedia (if it was then there would not be public editing that for sure) some of us (like me) feel this is a attempt to categorize and embody all human knowledge no matter how trivial one believes it to be, but I know I'm out numbered I'm not trying to change what your doing as I know I can't, I'm just objecting to it.--BerserkerBen 02:19, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

As I've stated before, nothing was removed, just some of it moved. The timeline was moved to a new page. I'm not saying it's all a waste, but anything that is truly important was kept on the page. The smaller things now have a seporate page, that's all. However, to have a section with 2 lines kind of defeats the purpose of a section.

As to this being an encylopedia, well, that is the intent. On the front page of wikipedia, it states The Free Encyclopedia, in quite a few languages. I'm not saying you can't put all of human knowledge here, just that some things deserve a seporate page, such as the timeline. If you would like that something else be more included on this page, do the research and add it. Take a look at the HiRISE page now, if you want an idea. The previous version was about 3 paragraphs in the MRO article, now there's 4 sections, all on HiRISE. Will it all stay the same? Probably not. I'm sure that this can be done with more instruments however. While I still will say that HiRISE is the key instrument on the MRO, it's far from the only one of signifigance. I just don't have the time nor the interest to study the other instruments to that point. I have been working on improving each of them, however. I've found that my calling in wikipedia seems to be to get some ideas down. Others then come and catagorize, edit, spell check, etc my ideas. Tuvas 06:57, 9 June 2006 (UTC)

Well, I'm finding it to be quite interesting, we have been on the FAC now for the second longest of any of the canadates to date, and we've had two people who at first objected, then supported, our becoming a FA. Kind of funny... Still, I think if it stays 2-0, then they will have to give us FA status... Strange. Tuvas 17:40, 28 June 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, but this is one way to get people disinterested in the FAC process. Wait them out with casual disinterest.--Koeppen 21:00, 28 June 2006 (UTC)

Peer Review

Well, I decided to go to the next step towards the FA status, and request a peer review. The page is at Wikipedia:Peer review/Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter/archive3. Thanks for the help. Tuvas 16:49, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

Expanding parts

Looking at some of the comments, we should probably expand the CTX, MARCI, and CRISM sections, to include somewhat more information. Could someone take charge of that? Tuvas 21:54, 25 May 2006 (UTC)

Overview section

Okay, there's also some parts that need to be condensed. I rather think that the launch timeline, overview, and aerobraking timeline could be condensed to just a few key points. The major dates should be kept, which would include launch, orbit, the end of aerobraking, start of the PSP, etc. What isn't needed is testing of MARCI, HiRISE, etc, those events won't interest the majority of people. I'm going to make some cuts to the article, it might need a bit of patching up afterwords though. Tuvas 01:54, 26 May 2006 (UTC)

Instrument Section

Also, looks like the intro section could be combined together to make something a bit neater. I can't quite think of how to do it, but I'm sure it can be re-done. I don't want to get rid of anything from HiRISE, but now that there is a main article about it, perhaps it could be simplified... Perhaps it could be done in the simple sections of Cameras, other science instruments, and engineering instruments. Just tossing a few ideas out there. Tuvas 02:25, 26 May 2006 (UTC)

Infobox

I'll try and fill out the infobox in a few hours, gotta get back to housecleaning for now... -Ravedave 02:08, 26 May 2006 (UTC)

"Citations needed"

I think there are a few too many 'citation needed' tags here.. most of the information is readily available at NASA's website, so i don't really see the need for all the inline citations.. any thoughts? Mlm42 13:07, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

I left a message on your talk page. Featured articles are expected to be amply sourced. If the goal is to get this article submitted to FAC, then every statement tagged has to be referenced with a reliable primary source. Otherwise, it will simply be rejected. Jtmichcock 13:12, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

I think I got all of the citations needed, mostly taken from NASA's MRO website, but a few others added. There was a few cases of duplicate references used in the same section, I don't know what to do with that, but at least everything's cited at least once. Make sure that I didn't make any mistakes (I caught myself making one, but there might have been another one or two to have crept in.) Things are looking alot better (And with 70+ edits in the last 24 hours, it should be). Now, what else still needs to be done...Tuvas 17:37, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

Slightly skewed

I didn't want to jump in too much and step on any toes - you guys have been doing a great job with this article. But a few things:
1) I reworded the opening paragraphs because when I read it the first time I got the impression that MRO was merely a stepping stone for future missions rather than a scientific mission of its own merit.
2) I concur with Tuvas' brief comment above: the science instrumentation section of this article currently reads like: MRO has HiRISE! (oh, and some other stuff too).
3) These sentences: "A few of the mission's main goals include mapping the Martian landscape with high resolution cameras [this is only one goal, not a few]. This is primarily to choose the best landing sites for future landers and rovers." made me grimace. Same comment as #1. There's lots of cool science to be done NOT just in preperation for the next landers (and let's face it, pure science might have to be done for a few more years if MSL takes the Mars Polar Lander or Mars Climate Orbiter approach). Assisting future missions has been a part of every Martian orbiter proposal but would never be funded if it was the primary objective. --will 07:53, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

I don't know if my perception is skewed, but HiRISE is by far the most talked about part of the MRO, some of it's single images are larger in memory than entire missions before. I suppose alot of information on other uses can be found at the HiRISE website, I'll look into it to include some more of HiRISEs goals. SHARAD would be nice to include something, perhaps even MARCI. (Refering to the summary) CTX, MCS, and CRISM, while they are useful, they are not quite in the same range, meaning they won't have daily weather forcasts and such. I'll just toss a few ideas that should be included, but I don't have time to make them work now. 1. Using RADAR to possibly identify liquid water underneath the polar ice caps. 2. Daily weather forcast of Mars. 3. Using hi-resolution images to date the Martian surface. Those should do. Tuvas 15:01, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

HiRISE is definitely exciting - no contest there. But as someone who works in a community of VIS/NIR and thermal infrared scientists, all of us are talking about CRISM. Certianly, HiRISE is the spotlight instrument, but it just makes me wince to see other instruments unloved. --will 00:02, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

Is CRISM the first visible-light ranged spectrometer to orbit MARS? Just curious, that's all. I guess though that it all just depends on your focus. I would like to hear though why everyone is so excited about CRISM. This not meant in a bad way, just curious, that's all. Tuvas 15:13, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

No offense taken! I was actually thinking about starting a CRISM page, but just don't have the time right now.... The basic gist is that CRISM will be telling us something about chemistry and mineralogy of places imaged by HiRISE. Hi-RISE will produce great images (which which is great for geomorphologists and outreach), but the compositions will be really key for many of the rest of the scientists (spectroscopists, geochemists, mineralogists, and petrologists). CRISM has both targed and untargeted modes with spectral bands are specifically chosen to be looking for to look for locations with water. It will cover "half the planet in the first few months" of the mission at low resolution (~150 m). That has some pretty exciting implications for learning about the seasonal movement of water and ice, the development of CO2 frosts on the poles, where areas of hydrated minerals are located (past water?), if gullies are really formed by snowpack (as has been proposed), etc. Plus the mineralogy of the near surface which gives you all kinds of information about how the Martian surface has evolved and even how the planet was formed. (Of course, you wouldn't learn this from CRISM's website whose designer must have totally flunked "Getting the public excited about your instrument" class. HiRISE's was 1000x better.) --will 21:29, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

HiRISE has a dedicated PR person, she just does PR, the website, and gives tours, nothing else in the way of her job. It helps us. I do remember that when we took our first picture, we noticed one area that showed up on our blue-green alot brighter than the red and NIR, we were going to pass it to CRISM for a target. So, what you way makes sense now. Thanks! Tuvas 00:14, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

Ok, so. I finally got around to creating a CRISM page. It's currently very short, but does offer a little more information than in the MRO article and I'm planning on adding more in the next few days. I linked it at the beginning next to the HiRISE link, however, there's no good place to link it in its section as "Main article: CRISM", so I linked the bold-faced acronym in its section instead. I don't really like how it looks, but are there any other suggestions? --will 00:02, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

Hmmm. I'll have to think about it. It took me a long time to get the HiRISE article to something decent, so you're allowed some time. I don't have much time at the moment, but I'll see what I can do to help you. Tuvas 01:02, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

Oh, and if you wish, feel free to expand the info on this page, and create a section for CRISM, just so long as it's a paragraph or two, it's fine. I'll put in a request to the Mars Spacecraft wikiproject to help with CRISM, and will work on it tommorow (If I have time) Tuvas 03:15, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

Well, I didn't help (much), but I did get it nominated for DYK article, I guess that's something. Tuvas 16:32, 18 June 2006 (UTC)

I saw that! Thanks for getting that up!--will 00:40, 19 June 2006 (UTC)

Orbital Period

I noticed that the listed orbital period of the MRO is 25 hours according to here. I work with the HiRISE team, and have a way to find a more current orbital period (With about a half-hour of precision), I know that it's about 21 hours, and it's decreasing quite quickly. However, this is something that is changing every day by a few minutes, is it really worth it to include yet? Perhaps we should just list the desired orbital perameters, and leave it at that? Tuvas 15:05, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

Yeah I shouldn't have added it, I had the perapsis and apoapsis added as well, but then commneted them out. I suppose none of the orbital figures will be static until aerobraking is complete. I'll removed it till then. Thanks! -Ravedave 15:59, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

Engineering data vrs Science instrumentation

I don't know about you all, but in my mind, the Science instrumentation should be placed before the engineering data, that's where the meat of the spacecraft is, and not in the engineering data. Comments? Tuvas 15:37, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

I think I like it better this way. --will 09:08, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

Silly formating: MRO or "the MRO"

Is it more appropriate to say "The MRO" than just "MRO"? For example, "The MRO will demonstrate new technologies." vs. "MRO will demonstrate new technologies." I ran into the same question when editing the Mars Global Surveyor page and wanted to know if there was some consensus. Personally I think I prefer it sans "the" just because that's what I hear everyone say. But perhaps it's personifying the spacecraft? Is one more correct than the other or are there strong opinions either way? --will 09:07, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

I've heard it both ways, and in general, it's easier to just say MRO. Either style is okay, however. Tuvas 14:34, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

Actually, I did a search for this, and found that NASA uses MRO, as does HiRISE (Using their internal documents, not publicly avaliable...). So, I've changed everything to consistantly say only MRO, omit the the in front of it. Tuvas 15:14, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

Wikipedia:WikiProject: Mars Spacecraft

Hey all. After some careful consideration, I've come to realize that it would be nice if we could continue such colaberation that we have had for this article, to improve similar articles. In the efforts to do so, I decided to create the Wikipedia:WikiProject: Mars Spacecraft. It's still in need of a great cleanup, but, I think it might just be worthwhile, once everything is nice and orderly. Only a few sections are really opened (What is there is a template that I used to start up), but, the task section is opened. It's probably not quite good enough for general use, however, I would like your input, feedback, and help. Thanks! Tuvas 16:06, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

Mission Duration

Anyone know what the durtion of the MRO mission is? If so please additto the infobox. -Ravedave 00:11, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

The "official" duration is 2 years, after which it will enter extended mode. No one knows exactly how long it will last, but it will likely be quite some time. Tuvas 01:13, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

Style for Units

I went through the entire article today and tried to standardize the units (i.e. writing them out vs. abbreviations). The Wikipedia:Manual of Style was not an incredible help, but I made up a few rules to follow that I thought looked good. I don't think any of these are set in stone, but as a reader, I tend to like consistency. Please object, add, or change if you find something wrong or inane:

In order of precedence:

1. Write the units out if they are after spelled out numbers, e.g. seven miles, 10 million kilometers
2. Use symbols if directly after a numeral, e.g. 20 km, 15 K, 25 kg
3. Time is never abbreviated unless it's part of a fraction, e.g. 15 seconds, three hours, 15 m/s, 25 m²/h
4. By default "mi" stands for statute mile (it must be specified to be "Nautical")

By "precedence" I mean the first rule trumps the third (i.e. if the value is written out, the units should be too, even if it's time in a fraction. E.g. seven meters per second, NOT seven m/s). Any thoughts? It would be nice to standardize some of the scientific style. --will 10:38, 17 June 2006 (UTC)

Intro/Lead vs. Overview

I split the Overview out of Overview, launch, and orbit insertion today as it seemed a bit of an interjection (the article really went Launch, Overview, and Orbit Insertion). Then I scanned up to the lead, and back to the overview, and back to the lead.... Essentially, I think the overview would be a GREAT way to shorten the lead which I've been thinking is long in some parts. But if there's serious objection to that then I think the overview should be IN the lead shouldn't it (they have a lot of the same information already)? Any takers either way? --will 09:24, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

Personally, my view is that the lead is the right length, not too long, nor too short, as it stands right now. Tuvas 14:01, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

That's cool by me too.--will 22:05, 21 June 2006 (UTC)

Pre-launch section

There has been a request (by FAC review) to add a section with information about MRO prior to launch. I don't have time to do it right now, but found a few references that may have some info in case someone else does. Some of these are probably useless, others might be better mentioned in the Timeline of the Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter:

• Selection of the instruments
• Selecting a contractor
• Vague article that mentions a few things about building a spacecraft.
• Atlas V delivery to Cape Canaveral

--Koeppen 01:03, 2 July 2006 (UTC)

Here some pre-launch links I used for the german MRO article:

• NASA IDENTIFIES TWO OPTIONS FOR 2003 MARS MISSIONS; DECISION IN JULY
• MRO delayed to 2005
• JPL NAMES MANAGER OF MARS RECONNAISSANCE ORBITER PROJECT
• ATLAS III CHOSEN TO LAUNCH MRO

--Bricktop 11:29, 2 July 2006 (UTC)

Well, I think I've got the key pre-launch points included, but, there isn't really much to say. Still, it seems to have added a nice touch to the article, and it gives the launch section a much better name (History). Tuvas 16:22, 4 July 2006 (UTC)

We should also say that MRO was originally competing against MER for the 2003 launch window. After MER(s) were choosen to fly in 2003, MRO was put on schedule for a 2005 launch. Sources: [5], [6]. And the sentence MRO was announced by NASA on October 26, 2000 in the Prior to launch section is not correct: check the same sources as above. --Bricktop 13:43, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

I beleive the first time the mission was called Mars Reconaissance Orbiter was on that press release. Perhaps there were some elements in the links which you stated to a possible surveyor mission, however, they do not appear to refer to the orbiter as the Mars Reconaissance Orbiter, rather, the Mars Surveyor Orbiter. Still, such a mention might be aplicable, I'll leave that up to you. Tuvas 14:52, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

Yes you may be right. I tried to add some things I've mentioned before, but you maybe should take a short look at my additions because of my relatively poor english. --Bricktop 00:45, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

I looked! That's some great extra info and I just did some rephrasing.--Will.i.am 02:05, 7 July 2006 (UTC)

What next?

Well, we've officially failed the FAC process (And we were so close too...) Anyways, what should we do next? We can do one of two things, either try for a peer review again, or just take the article apart ourselves, either way applying for FA status in about a month? Thoughts anyone? Tuvas 15:52, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

The article is good, we know that. I think we should wait till the MRO is in a stable orbit and doing science before applying again. Then everything should be pretty static, and I am confident it shall succeeed. -Ravedave 17:07, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

Okay, but I still think it might be a good idea to go through another peer review. The end of the FAC process brought out alot of ideas that might well be able to improve this article. Tuvas 17:16, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

I'm in. It seemed like the main opposition was really the stability issue, which suprised me really. However, that pretty much means no FA for ... well months if not a year. But I also agree that the other comments - another strong copy edit, perhaps less pictures, longer sections on individual instruments, etc. should be discussed.--Will.i.am 21:53, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

I object to making this article a FA until the primary science mission is over (~2 years), first of all try implementing some of those PR ideas first before going under another PR! Second it won't be stable until after its science mission is over before and during which alot of discoveres are going to be made. --BerserkerBen 20:44, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

Further cleanup

One of the FAC notes was that the article had too many images. I think they are partially right as I think Image:MRO_CTX_camera.jpg, Image:MRO_MARCI_experiment.jpg, and Image:MRO_CRISM_prelaunch_2.jpg are all pretty boring. I am going to remove Image:MRO_CTX_camera.jpg and Image:MRO_MARCI_experiment.jpg if there are no objections. Also is there anything else that needs to be done? I know the orbital data needs to be added to the infobox, however that data wont be stable until aerobreaking is complete. -Ravedave 17:22, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

Object!, There was only one objection to the images and many others seem to be impressed and approving of images. If you have to remove images then only remove images that won't be orphaned, there are alot of MFAH that will delete orphaned images very quickly, before they can be put to good use somewhere else.--BerserkerBen 20:49, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

Auto peer review

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Aerobraking's over

Well, that time has finally come, MRO's now in a transitional orbit, AFAIK, almost right on the planned orbit. I'm not positive yet, so don't quote me... Anyways, we need to make some changes to reflect that aerobraking is over, probably as soon as we have confirmation. Tuvas 18:37, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

Found it:[7]. Updated text accordingly.--Planetary 06:36, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

PSP

Okay folks, PSP is just around the corner, final testing for MRO starts this week! Yah! But, that means we're going to have to go through this site quite a bit. I know there's probably alot of "This instrument will do this" type of references, we should work on changing them to the present tense. I beleive that we now have all instruments on line, ei, there isn't really anything else major that can go wrong in the transition phase, we'll find out when transition imaging takes place at the end of this month. I think we should polish this article up, and push for a FA in early October, about the time that the solar conjuction is taking place. That means the results of the vote should be done by the end of solar conjunction, just in time for PSP:-) I'm going to remove the current event tag, as there isn't really that much more to be had in the way of current events. I also took the oporunity to archive the talk page, it was needing it, and it's a good time to start again. Comments? Tuvas 17:45, 18 September 2006 (UTC)

What will being FA do? I would rather wait until after the primary science mission is over. --BerserkerBen 11:24, 19 September 2006 (UTC)

Wait 2 years?? Thast a bit much. I would prefer to wait until the science mission gets underway for a little bit and preferrably until after it sends back its first high quality photo. At that point all of the article execpt one or two sentances will be in past tense. After that I can't imagine many peopel will think the article could change alot. -Ravedave ^{(help name my baby)} 16:59, 19 September 2006 (UTC)

High-quality photos from all of the instuments will be avaliable in the next few weeks. I totally agree, two years is a bit excesive... HiRISE takes it's next pictures on Oct. 29th, SHARAD has already taken pictures, as has MCS. I think MARCI has too, but, I'd have to check that one out for sure... CTX and CRISM are both about the same time as HiRISE (I don't have the exact table in front of me, but everything I've seen says it'll be about the same time). Since MRO is in it's final orbit, all of these things are the real deal, so... Of course, they won't be released to the public right away, so, it might be better for those. HiRISE will release it's first image the 29th, ASAP, the rest of the images will also be released as they come in, for the most part (Exceptions being ones that might have a press release behind them). Among the sights will be Victoria Crater, current home of Opportunity. Should be fun, I can't wait:-) However, if the previous case is to show us what to expect, we can expect that the other instruments will lag (HiRISE has the fastest turnover, however, it also has the most money of any of the instruments, thus the most resources...) Tuvas 03:55, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

What about scientific discovers made by MRO? Can the article be made a FA without considering the vast amount of information that as you mention are just days away from just starting to be delivered. I can see people at a FA discussion opposing FA status using my argument. By the way what will getting FA statues provide now that can’t wait 2 years? --BerserkerBen 22:45, 21 September 2006 (UTC)

Other cameras

Why can't the "other cameras" get there own labels, other instruments like the MCS and SHARAD which have equally small amount of text get their own titles. I think for aesthetics and NPOV that those cameras get there own titles. If there are no objections I will make the changes within days. --BerserkerBen 20:57, 25 September 2006 (UTC) There I did it now if we could get a picture of MCS all the insterments will ahve their own picture.--BerserkerBen 16:19, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

Peer Review

I think it might be a good time to request a new peer review, there have been quite a few changes since the last one, and I wouldn't mind an extra set of eyes to make sure we got everything ready for PSP. Tuvas 19:04, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

Timeline

We've been ignoring the Timeline of the Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter page, I think I've got it mostly up to date, with a few of the notable future dates now listed. You might want to check it, and make sure. Tuvas 05:26, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

Just FYI

For anyone interested, all instruments on MRO have been turned on, deployed, lens caps removed, etc, for the first time ever!!! So, everything is now set for transition imaging, which will begin Friday, at least for HiRISE, I don't know about the other instruments... Still, it's exciting! Tuvas 23:18, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

Another update, two instruments released their first images today from Science orbit, HiRISE and CRISM. I can get the links the the sites if you want them, but they are pretty easy to find. I don't have time at the moment to post anything, but you might want to update them. Tuvas 23:20, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

Wow amazing pictures! I've uploaded the one HiRISE image Image:MRO first image from mapping orbit PIA08789.jpg, please feel free to use it! --Bricktop 00:01, 30 September 2006 (UTC)

Just wait till the full image comes up. There are things I'm still thinking, wow, that's just amazing, and it's only the begining... I can't remember off the top of my head, but the number 10000 seems to stick out in my head, as the number of images we'll eventually receive... And this image is only a fraction of the first... Tuvas 01:00, 30 September 2006 (UTC)

Orbit

Can anyone find details on the current orbit for addition to the infobox? -Ravedave ^{(help name my baby)} 19:48, 9 October 2006 (UTC)

See [8]: The altitude of the orbit ranges from 250 kilometers (155 miles) to 316 kilometers (196 miles) above the surface. --Bricktop 04:04, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

MRO fails to find MGS

"NASA's Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has failed to spot the silent Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) spacecraft. The agency will next call on the Opportunity rover to listen for the missing spacecraft's radio beacon, though mission members say MGS may already be dead." [9]. Not sure if its inclusion worthy. -Ravedave ^{(help name my baby)} 05:21, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

images

Checkout this cool image...

Victoria crater with rover Opportunity a crater's edge taken by the HiRISE camera on board Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter (MRO)

yowzah, that's impressive.. Mlm42 20:06, 9 October 2006 (UTC)

I thought it was pretty amazing how the shadow of the mast could be seen. Maybe I should crop it and add it to the article to show the resolution that can be accomplished. -Ravedave ^{(help name my baby)} 01:13, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

If we put that image in we should start to worry about how big the "Events and discoveries" is going to be 1-2 years if we keep adding images at a rate of 1 a month. Is there any way we could get a image of opportunity taken by MRO orbiter with some deconvolution routines run on it, or have they already done that?--BerserkerBen 02:10, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

All images released to the public from HiRISE have been deconvoluted. But that mainly only matters for the high-precision measurements, HiRISE by itself is able to be within 100 counts or so even without processing, with 16k possibilities. And yes, there are some geometric features and such that are corrected, but the products released are the most accurate representation that we can get, and they get more accurate constantly. However, it is an exciting thing, we'll worry about an increasingly large events and discovery section when there's alot more things there... Tuvas 21:10, 10 October 2006 (UTC)

It is just that it looks like the color layers are not matted well, they seem to be slightly off from each other, but what ever. I'm going to move the timeline link down to discovers & events section. --BerserkerBen 15:00, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

I took a bit of a break from MRO, but if I can interject a suggestion: what about creating a "Results from the Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter" article (or "Discoveries" or similar)? (1) It can be stubby at first and just grow as results like this image come it. (2) You could nominate some headlines for the "Current Events" section on the mainpage. (3) It would also preserve the stability of this page until a list of published results come out and can be added (if you desire).--Will.i.am 06:33, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

Tense

The article is a jumble of past, present and future tense sentences, someone needs to go through the article and fix these things. For example: "MRO will carry a variety of engineering instruments" needs to be change to "MRO carries a variety of engineering instruments" and that just one of many many sentances that states things that have already happened. Now this is just my idea but I think it would be best to make as many past tense statements as possible, as things that have happened don't need to be changed in the future. For example: "MRO joins four other spacecraft currently studying Mars: Mars Express, Mars Odyssey, and two Mars Exploration Rovers." might be better as "MRO joined five other spacecraft at that time studying Mars: Mars Global Surveyor, Mars Odyssey, Mars Express, and two Mars Exploration Rovers." This way future corrections to the statements are not needed. If no one objects eventually I'll get on it--BerserkerBen 03:56, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

Mostly done. I may have changed some things from "will" to does without obtaining correct facts such as the prediction that 70% of the fuel would be used on orbital insertion. I think the article is ok for now though. I think in 3-6 months when there is more information released the article can be updated and cleaned up. -Ravedave ^{(Adopt a State)} 18:24, 26 January 2007 (UTC)

mission duration

Is the mission duration the time the it is active or the time it is doing science? [10] -Ravedave ^{(help name my baby)} 06:01, 23 November 2006 (UTC)

MRO will (hopefully!) be doing science for several years to come, maybe a decade or more, but it's primary science phase will only last 2 years, after which it will do science still, but it will continue to do other things as well. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 71.214.161.240 (talk) 05:32, 7 February 2007 (UTC).

All NASA exploration missions have a short nominal duration, based on the time required to achieve the goals in the original proposal, and the initial budget. If everything is still working, and the mission is still producing valuable scientific data, they're always extended indefinitely. Satellites normally carry enough fuel to maintain their orbit for several years. The mission duration has more to do with politics, budgets, and ass-covering (the manufacturers don't want to be held accountable for dysfunctionality beyond the original proposal, and rightfully so) than with the actual expected operational life of the spacecraft. Aside from MRO, every active Mars mission is years beyond its nominal phase. It's a nice benchmark to declare "mission accomplished", and everyone comes out a winner when something like Odyssey or the Rovers are still going strong years later.James A. Stewart 23:35, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

News

[11] -Ravedave 19:19, 12 October 2007 (UTC)

CTX camera

I'm confused from the article whether the CTX camera is taking images 30 or 40km across. Both figures are given. Maybe this could be checked and corrected? Or if correct but in different contexts, it could be reworded to be more clear? sjwk 00:50, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

The cited link and this link give 30 km so I just deleted the 40 km reference. -- JamesHoadley (talk) 13:14, 16 December 2007 (UTC)

HiRise catches avalanches in action

To add - HiRise catches avalanches in action- http://hirise.lpl.arizona.edu/PSP_007338_2640 - Ravedave (talk) 18:55, 4 March 2008 (UTC)

HiRise takes picture of Earth and the Moon from Mars

Hi,

I think the picture on this site: http://www.nasa.gov/mission_pages/MRO/multimedia/mro20080303earth.html would be worth adding to the page. It's the Earth and the Moon photographed by the HiRise camera from Mars. Anybody bother? (March 6, 2008, 09.20 MET) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.132.248.80 (talk) 08:21, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

I've uploaded it to Wikimeda Commons; but to be honest, I got no idea as of where in the article I should insert it; it's pretty full of images already. --Harald Khan Ճ 19:47, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

GA Sweeps

This article has been reviewed as part of Wikipedia:WikiProject Good articles/Project quality task force. I believe the article currently meets the criteria and should remain listed as a Good article. The article history has been updated to reflect this review. Regards, Malleus Fatuorum (talk) 19:17, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

Statement of other Mars probe

I'm changing the present statement:

MRO is one of six spacecraft actively studying Mars at close range, the others being Mars Express, Mars Odyssey, Phoenix and two Mars Exploration Rovers.

to

When MRO entered orbit there were five other spacecraft at Mars: Mars Global Surveyor, Mars Express Orbiter|Mars Express, Mars Odyssey, and two Mars Exploration Rovers

This way the statement never need to be changed when a space probe lands or another spacecraft goes defunk.--BerserkerBen (talk) 02:03, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Space Internet

The MRO was not part of the tests for a "space internet protocol" It was done by Epoxy and a ground based network. [[12]]

Unless there is some other news that I could not find in NASA's site, I believe that section should be removed?

Diego bf109 (talk) 12:58, 2 March 2010 (UTC)

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Picture of the day

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Add NASA MRO website http://www.nasa.gov/mission_pages/MRO/main/index.html

Could this NASA MRO website be added to the infobox? http://www.nasa.gov/mission_pages/MRO/main/index.html It seems each organization: NASA and JPL, each create their own website. Thank you,Jcardazzi (talk) 03:24, 6 June 2015 (UTC)jcardazzi Completed by user.

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Sun synchronous orbit

Hi everyone, I think this article should say a bit more about its sun synchronous orbit. This is especially relevant for its observations of the Recurrent Slope Lineae. They can only be observed close up at around 3 pm local time - scientists would like to observe them in the early morning, but are forced to observe at the least likely time to find evidence of liquid water there because of the orbit chosen for its science orbit.

See "MRO and Odyssey are the two NASA orbiters with Proximity-1 relay communications capability. Their orbits are Sun synchronous. Each time the orbiter crosses over Mars’ equator from south to north, the mean local solar time (LST) at the ground directly below is 3:00 p.m. (MRO) or 5:00 a.m. (Odyssey). " from section 1.4 of http://descanso.jpl.nasa.gov/DPSummary/MRO_092106.pdf

It's orbit also has an inclination of 93 degrees, see page 9 of that paper. And orbital period 1 hr 52 minutes.

I think the article has all that information except the information about the timing "Each time the orbiter crosses over Mars’ equator from south to north, the mean local solar time (LST) at the ground directly below is 3:00 p.m." which I think is worth mentioning because of its relevance to RSL observations. And it could be worth highlighting all this in a separate section as well as the mention you already have in the right panel. Just suggestions. Robert Walker (talk) 09:45, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

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Darian calendar in infobox

Inclusion of the calculations to the Darian calendar is misleading here. It implies a level of acceptance, even officialness that does not exist. The Darian calendar is a proposal, among many, for time keeping on Mars.

The closest thing we have to a Mars calendar is the year numbering system is what most scientists use, especially in comparing atmospheric data from year to year. Years begin from the northern hemisphere vernal equinox in (Earth) 1955 and are tracked by solar longitude from there. --MadeYourReadThis (talk) 22:58, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

A bit late, but I agree. I've removed it because it isn't used on any other articles. ARandomName123 (talk) 15:17, 9 December 2022 (UTC)

https://www.planetary.org/articles/mars-calendar

GA Reassessment

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GA from 2006, reassessed in 2008. Currently it can't be GA, problems include: short lead (template placed in 2021), 13 "citation needed" tags, 8 "failed verification" tags. Article is outdated: the last date in its timeline section is 2018; Discoveries section is about 2009-2011 events (with one confirmation of discovery from 2015). Article should either be completely rewritten, or stripped its GA status. Artem.G (talk) 16:29, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

• Delist per the above. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:27, 14 January 2023 (UTC)

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Inconsistency in dates

In the "Mission Objectives" section, the article lists the rovers and landers that MRO helped choose the landing sites for, but there is an inconsistency there. Most of the missions are listed with the years they landed on Mars. Curiosity is listed as 2012, when it landed, instead of when it was launched in 2011. Same thing with Perseverance. InSight launched and landed in the same year, so there's no difference there. But Phoenix is listed as 2007, its launch year, instead of its landing year, 2008. This just confused me, I'm not sure if it's really an issue or not, I just wanted to point it out. 185.163.72.18 (talk) 19:39, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing it out! I've changed the Phoenix lander to match the others, changing the year from the launch year, 2007, to the landing year, 2008. ARandomName123 (talk) 20:21, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Creation of a Gallery section?

The discoveries and photographs section has a lot of images, especially images of other spacecraft. The articled itself also has a ton of images, some of which, in my opinion, should be moved. Additionally, the MRO produces thousands of images a year, so more recent photos could be added to a new gallery section. Thoughts? ARandomName123 (talk) 17:33, 2 February 2023 (UTC)

The orbiter makes tons of discoveries, so the discovery section should be as brief as possible, only 1 picture per discovery listed if that. And the tectonic fractures picture in the timeline seems completely unnecessary. It looks like there is a gallery section, but it only has 2 pictures and they're of the same thing. Maybe a few of the unnecessary pictures in the rest of the article could go there instead, as well as a few more recent photos (if you need those I can supply them, I spend a lot of time looking at the HiWish map) such as pictures of the rovers and any interesting discoveries the orbiter makes. DragonGirlStar (talk) 15:25, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

The discovery section used to be even more cluttered, since it used to include all the images in the gallery section. The gallery section has more than two images, but we should probably remove one of the duplicates. The tectonic fractures picture could be replaced by a variation of the Victoria crater image, where the rover mentioned in source 24 circled. The image in the source is pretty good. If you could supply some interesting recent photos, that would be great, thanks. I'll move some unnecessary pictures to the gallery when I have time. ARandomName123 (talk) 18:05, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Here's a few HiRISE pictures, I might get more later if you think I should. The first is of Melas Chasma, the second is of Perseverance (in the center - I forgot to mark that when uploading, but it's kind of obvious so that's fine), and the third is of InSight and its hardware. DragonGirlStar (talk) 20:16, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Thanks. Could you also add one or two pictures without any spacecraft/rovers? We already have a lot of them. ARandomName123 (talk) 21:08, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get some when I have more time, I'm kind of busy right now. I just figured the rover pictures are usually what people are more interested in, but you are right that there's a lot. Do you have any regions/styles/formations you think should be in more pictures, or just any interesting one I come across? DragonGirlStar (talk) 16:37, 6 April 2023 (UTC)

It's fine, take your time. For the pictures, I guess just choose some interesting ones, or some linked to some recent discoveries. I'm planning to update that section in the future. ARandomName123 (talk) 21:23, 6 April 2023 (UTC)

Here's two more, both unnamed craters. I'll get more when I have free time, but I have some good ideas.

DragonGirlStar (talk) 16:52, 17 April 2023 (UTC)

1st one is pretty good. I'll move it into the main article when I have time. ARandomName123 (talk) 16:08, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

Here's two more, one of dunes near Mars's north pole, and the other one is something I think the average wikipedia-goer will like: the exact coordinates that the book The Martian is supposed to take place. This page probably gets a lot of sci-fi fans, so I think that would interest them. (first one is the book site, second is the dunes)

DragonGirlStar (talk) 17:15, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

DragonGirlStar (talk) 17:16, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

Sure. I think one or two more should be enough. Do you have any ones with like more square porportions and in colour? ARandomName123 (talk) 20:00, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

I can find more squarish ones, but the HiWish website doesn't have the images in full color, only partial color. There should be some with full color on the various HiRISE social media accounts. I know they publish a lot of its images in color on Twitter, but I'm not allowed on Twitter, so if you want to check that you probably could. I'll grab some with the square proportions. DragonGirlStar (talk) 13:06, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

Sure. I'll also take some from here: Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter Image Gallery | NASA ARandomName123 (talk) 13:13, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

I got some that aren't nearly as long, HiRISE images don't usually come in squares and when they do it's areas that have already been photographed many times so these were hard to find.

DragonGirlStar (talk) 17:05, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I'll move a few of them in. ARandomName123 (talk) 17:10, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

I notice the pictures aren't in the gallery yet - should I add them or are you working on it? DragonGirlStar (talk) 16:44, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

Oh shoot. Sorry, I was stressed about exams at around that time, and it completely slipped my mind. Thanks for reminding me. I'll add in the long one with the big crater, the one with the dunes, and the one after that. If you think more photos should be included, feel free to add them in. ARandomName123 (talk) 16:49, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

Could you rotate these three photos: File:HiRISE image unnamed crater (1).jpg - Wikimedia Commons, File:HiRISE picture of dunes.jpg - Wikimedia Commons and File:HiRISE craters on Arsia Mons.jpg - Wikimedia Commons?

I'll add in the unrotated versions for now, but I'm not familiar with wikimedia commons. Thanks! ARandomName123 (talk) 16:56, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

Why do they need to be rotated? DragonGirlStar (talk) 17:20, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

They don't have to be rotated, but I think it'll fit better on the page. Also, do you think we should remove 1 or 2 images from the "Other spacecraft" section? More specifically the second and fourth photos. The gallery section is filling up pretty quickly, and the images mentioned are blurry, and don't add much to the article. ARandomName123 (talk) 17:37, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

I agree, those don't add much to the article or gallery. DragonGirlStar (talk) 17:40, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 07:11, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Happy to review the article. AM

Review comments

Lead section / infobox (done)

missions to Mars - consider unlinking, as the link leads to an article that is only about past missions, not future ones. I would link Mars here instead. Done: I got some access to the internet, so I'll do a few of the simpler ones here. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:07, 13 August 2023 (UTC) Link Cape Canaveral; orbit; geologic forces (I would use Geology of Mars); reconnaissance; spectrometer. What is a radar? Done I'm not too sure what you mean, but I've clarified it to "Subsurface radar" and linked to SHARAD. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:58, 16 August 2023 (UTC) Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has been active – ‘MRO has been active’? Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:07, 13 August 2023 (UTC) The references are used to cite uncontroversial information, and as this information should already be stated in the main text of the article, they are are not needed here. Partly done: I left the source for the stat about data returned, since it's not in the body. I'll add a mention of the data returned stat when I get access to my laptop. Mobile editing is painful. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:07, 13 August 2023 (UTC) Something like this image would be better used in the infobox than the current one. However this has been reverted by another editor, imo for no good reason. I'll message this person. AM JPL - use the full name, as the abbreviation will be unfamiliar to many readers (see MOS:ABBR). Ditto APL / ASI. MRO - if the full name of the spacecraft is written in italics, the abbreviation should be as well. Done in lead. I'll work through the rest of the article later. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:07, 13 August 2023 (UTC) Done All: Back home, so I should be able to work through these much quicker. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:58, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

1 Pre-launch

Link NASA. twin is redundant. a new theme: - a comma or a dash is better here. Avoid christened (MOS:IDIOM). to launch in 2005 – ce to ‘to be launched in 2005. Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter - ‘Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter (MRO)’, as MRO appears later in the paragraph. All Done: is the abbreviation clarification needed if it's already in the lead? ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:20, 13 August 2023 (UTC) Yes, as the lead is considered to be separate from the main text. It is a stand-alone summary of the article. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:16, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

2 Mission objectives

Consider enlarging the image still further, to at least upright=2, and possibly more. It might be useful to readers if "mission support" objectives is explained briefly (in brackets or perhaps as a separate note). November 2006 – November 2010 - ‘November 2006 to November 2010’ for the sake of consistency. designed – ‘initially designed’ sounds better imo, as they were later extended. Convert the lists to prose (for the reasons, see MOS:LISTBASICS). It’s not clear exactly what the dates in brackets represent. I would not use brackets here, but incorporate the dates into the sentence. All Done. Might want to check over the prose I converted. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:29, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

3 Launch and orbital insertion

Link trajectory correction maneuvers in the caption and the text {Orbital maneuver). Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) The launch image is purely decorative. By removing it, a sandwiching issue in this section also disappears (MOS:SANDWICH). I think we should keep the launch image. A large portion of spacecraft articles contain one, and it helps as a visual aid. To avoid the sandwiching issue, it could be moved to the other side, once one of the animations has been removed. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 00:26, 20 August 2023 (UTC) The second animation provides little to helps understand the text, and is not visually useful after a few seconds (the pink orbit lines turn into a block of colour). I would declutter this section by removing the image. imo, the first animation is the least useful as the information is already covered in the diagram. At least the second animation helps provide a visual aid for the process of aerobraking. A multiple image template could also work, like at Artemis 1#Mission_profile_animation. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 00:26, 20 August 2023 (UTC) OK, move that one. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:36, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Done. multiple image template or no? ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 16:57, 20 August 2023 (UTC) @ARandomName123: Go for the muliple image, see if it works. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:13, 21 August 2023 (UTC) Done. I think the multiple image looks fine, a lot better than without. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 00:50, 22 August 2023 (UTC) Link calibrated (Calibration); period (Orbital period); thrusters (Thrusters (spacecraft)). Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) Mars Global Surveyor and the rovers Spirit and Opportunity have since ceased – this, and the text that follows, should be edited out as being excessively detailed, or placed in a separate note. I would do the former. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) cuts in half – 'halved’? Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) This altitude depends on the thickness of the atmosphere because Martian atmospheric density changes with its seasons – this should be cut, as it strays off the topic. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) Martian is redundant here. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) Avoid fine-tune (MOS:IDIOM). Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC) were turned off prior to the solar conjunction – readers may be interested in knowing why was this done. Is the information avaialble? Done. Added some info plus a source. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:44, 18 August 2023 (UTC) Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter - as these has been abbreviated as the MRO in the Pre-launch section, I would be consistent and from then on use the abbreviation instead the full name. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:19, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

4 Timeline

See also – ‘Main article’? Link high resolution image (Image resolution); stepping (presumably Stepping (debugging)); field of view; mitigation; noise (Noise (spectral phenomenon)); parachute; seasonal processes (Climate_of_Mars#Seasons); supersonic (Supersonic speed); safe mode (Safe mode in spacecraft); solar panels (Solar panels on spacecraft); pattern recognition (no hyphen); cryocoolers; wavelength. was suspended – ‘had been suspended’. warm-up time – I’m not sure what this means. afaik, it has something to do with how space is too cold for technology to operate, so instruments and tech needs to be "warmed up" to be able to function. if you need further clarification just lmk. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 01:46, 20 August 2023 (UTC) I understand the concept now, perhaps a brief explanation here for the sake of any curious readers would work. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:43, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Done. Added efn with text and source: Due to the coldness of space, spacecraft instruments need to be "warmed up" to operate properly. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:22, 21 August 2023 (UTC) enabled discoveries regarding – ‘that have revealed more of’ sounds slightly better imo. The section’s images have created another sandwiching issue, which needs to be sorted. I would replace terrain with ‘relief’ (a minor point). (CO2) is not needed. is slightly - ‘was slightly’. (not GA) the best ever pictures of a comet from the Oort cloud – is an image available? Readers might be interested (and it would break up the text somewhat). ok, well an image is available but it looks a bit less interesting as I thought it would look. See: [13]. I'll leave the decision up to you. I can probably use a different image though, probably from the gallery, to break up the text. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 01:46, 20 August 2023 (UTC) See what you mean, let's forget the image for now. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:47, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Britain's – consider amending to ‘the British Mars lander’. Britain's sounds more concise than "the British Mars lander" ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 01:46, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Understood. AM more than 11 years prior - is redundant text. components - consider amending to ‘MRO components’. Mostly Done: I need to do a bit more research about the banded terrain part, as it's lacking a source, but I think terrain would be better. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 01:46, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

5 Instruments

N The last two sentences need to be copy edited, the information is outdated. Done. I've added some missing info about some science experiments, so you might want to check "Engineering instruments and experiments" again. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 20:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC) Doppler information - move the link to Doppler effect here? Amitchell125 (talk) 06:48, 21 August 2023 (UTC) Done. I've added a sentence about the final tech demonstration that was missing, if you want to check it over. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:07, 21 August 2023 (UTC) No worries here. AM The images for the main instruments are rather too large for the paragraphs they are placed next to, and imo causes this section to look untidy. One solution to consider to to put them images together here, at the top of the section, using {{multiple image}}. Happy to help here if you want. Amitchell125 (talk) 13:25, 14 August 2023 (UTC) Sure, thanks! I only have access to a phone rn; editing is sometimes annoying. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 00:37, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

5.1 HiRISE
I would amend the title to HiRISE, as the acronym has already been introduced. Ditto the titles from 5.2 to 5.6, the abbreviation/acronyms for these have also been mentioned. (μrad) – is redundant. Ditto or NIR. ''28 Gigabit (Gb) – consider amending this to ‘28 Gb’. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:29, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

5.2 CTX (Context Camera)
Link mosaic (Photographic mosaic). All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

5.3 MARCI (Mars Color Imager)
* Link fisheye lens. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

5.4 CRISM (Compact Reconnaissance Imaging Spectrometer for Mars)

Link spectrum. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC) The shutdown of CRISM has already been discussed in the Timeline section. Considering the size of that section, I would move the relevant paragraph from there to here, and edit out any duplicate information. Comment: I've shortened the shutdown sentence here to "The CRISM instrument was shut down on April 3, 2023," but I think leaving the more detailed explanation in the Timeline section would be better. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC) Understood. AM

5.5 MCS (Mars Climate Sounder)

Link atmosphere's vertical variations (Atmosphere_of_Mars#Vertical_structure); pressure; humidity. Linked to Climate of Mars instead for pressure and humidity global is redundant. I'm unclear as to what dust density actually is. Dust storms on mars. I've linked to Martian soil#Atmospheric_dust for clarification JPL - 'Jet Propulsion Laboratory (JPL)', linked. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

5.7 Engineering instruments

Link Martian gravitational field (Gravity of Mars). velocity – this has a specific meaning in physics that is not the same as speed (see Velocity). I would amend the text to say ‘speed’, unless the technical term is intended. proven its functionality by relaying – simplify to ‘relayed’? Although moon imaging is not mission critical – ‘Although this is not critical’ sounds better imo. There is a proposal to search for small moons, dust rings, and old orbiters with it - a few points here. Which “old orbiters” are being referred to here? Can information about the proposal be updated, as we are talking here about an idea brought up over 10 years ago? Who proposed the idea? All Done: For the proposal, I don't think it was ever followed up on; searching the title only gives this source, it doesn't seem like any of the suggested tests have been done, and the MRO isn't mentioned in this capacity in any of the sample return documents I've checked. I've decided to remove it. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:38, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

6.2 Power systems
more than 26% of the Sun's energy – amend to something like ‘more than 26% of the Sun's energy it receives’ so that the text makes more sense. At Mars – ‘Whilst orbiting Mars’ sounds better imo. All Done. Changed "more than 26% of the Sun's energy" to "more than 26% of the energy it receives from the Sun." ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:59, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

6.3 Electronic systems
Link flash memory. specially built – ‘purpose-built’ sounds slightly better imo. All Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:59, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

6.4 Telecommunications system

Link amplifier. I would avoid so far (see MOS:RELTIME). The Electra communications package is a UHF software-defined radio (SDR) that provides a flexible platform for evolving relay capabilities – this sentence and the one that follows are already to be found in Engineering instruments. is projected to be – should presumably now be amended to ‘is’. such as launch – as this has now happened, the text needs to be amended. The Ka-band subsystem was used for demonstration purposes – consider amending to something like ‘The Ka-band subsystem was used to show how such a system could be used by spacecraft in the future’ to make the text easier to understand. All Done. Added abit extra info as well. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 18:58, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

6.5 Propulsion and attitude control

Link star tracker. Twenty – ‘20’; sixteen – ‘16’. Done Above ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:57, 16 August 2023 (UTC) (skewed) wheel – in what way is it skewed? Don't actually know what this means, and I can't find a source for this so it's been removed. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 19:40, 22 August 2023 (UTC) The caption does not fully explain the image. It isn’t drawn to scale (and this isn’t stated on the image itself), so I would mention this in the caption. The image needs to be moved to so it sits beside the text, not underneath it. Graph is pretty outdated, being created before the MRO was even launched. There doesn't seem to be an updated version from NASA (afaik), so I've removed it to free up some space for an image from the gallery. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:47, 22 August 2023 (UTC) accelerometer - Move the link to where it first appears (Engineering instruments). Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:57, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

8 Discoveries

Consider avoiding using the five subtitles here. Removing them wouldn't make this section overlong. I would then place the images together at the bottom of this section, something that imo unifies the text and makes the section less cluttered. Mostly Done. I merged the related subtitles together (Ice + ice and chlorine + aqueous). I kept the subtitle for the slope lineae mainly to preserve {{main article}}. Now that there are three sections for three images, I think keeping them at their respective section should be fine. Feedback is appreciated, though. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 16:14, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Looking again, I'm not sure the main article hatnote is appropriate here, as the link leads to an article that is not directly about the MRO, and so it is off topic. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:51, 21 August 2023 (UTC) Done? Changed to see also. Also added a see also to the top of the section, linking to Evidence of water on Mars found by Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter. Do you think HiWish program should be mentioned, or somewhere in this article? ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:14, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

8.1 Ice exposed in new craters
Link Science (Science (journal)). with the Compact Imaging Spectrometer (CRISM) on board the Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter - simplify to ‘using CRISM'. five locations. Three of the locations are in the Cebrenia quadrangle – amend to ‘five locations, three of which were in the Cebrenia quadrangle’ to improve the prose. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 17:30, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

8.3 Chloride deposits
Consider linking come out of solution (Solution (chemistry)). All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 17:30, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

8.5 Recurring slope lineae
(RSL) is redundant, as the abbreviation does not occur again. recurring slope lineae – is an introduced term, and so I would put it in italics. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 17:30, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

9 Gallery

This set of galleries (and therefore the subsections) are superfluous, as the images are available in the Common category associated with this article (see WP:GALLERY). Any of the images can be used to illustrate the text (and there is room for them), they should be be moved to the right place in the article. Done. Removed gallery section, was able to move around 4-5 images back into the article. Might want to check image placement, since a few of them are only related to the text they are placed next to through only 1 or 2 sentences. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 21:45, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

11 Notes
Note a requires a citation. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 01:47, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

12 References

What makes you think space.com is a reliable source? Ditto spaceexplored.com; https://spaceflightnow.com. WP:RSP? Author qualification looks fine as well. As for the other two, spaceexplored.com has been removed as part of the excessively detailed bit about the missions, and I'm working on finding a replacement for spaceflightnow.com. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 02:00, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Thanks for WP:RSP, a useful link I was unaware of. AM As the New York Times is a subscription service, consider adding a ‘url-access=subscription’. Done. ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 02:00, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

14.1 General

''NASA's Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter page – should probably be removed, as the official website is already provided in the infobox. MRO Mars Arrival Press Kit (2006) – can easily be found in the offical MRO website, so isn’t needed here. Interactive 3D map of Mars created by CTX – this map is produced from MRO equipment, but is not directly connected with the spacecraft itself, and so the link should be removed. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 18:43, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

14.2 Official instrument websites
website has a small w in each case. I would add the website providers, e.g. ‘CRISM website from John Hopkins University’. All Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 18:43, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

14.3 Images

(Not GA) Consider collapsing the navboxes using {{Navboxes |title=Articles and topics related to the Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter |state=collapsed |list1= {{Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter}} {{NASA navbox|state=collapsed}} {{Mars spacecraft}} {{Jet Propulsion Laboratory}} {{Solar System probes}} {{Orbital launches in 2005}} }}. HiRISE Image Catalog – this is easily located in the external link given in the previous subsection, and so is not needed here. Aren’t Kevin Gill’s images included within the HiRISE Image Catalog? If so, I wouldn’t include this external link. I have added it to the external links section of Areography. All Done. Do you think adding these two websites would be helpful? [14][15] ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 18:43, 18 August 2023 (UTC) [1] looks fine; but [2] is no different. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:19, 20 August 2023 (UTC) Done ARandomName123 (talk)Ping me! 16:04, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

On hold

I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 26th August to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. I'll start checking the work you've already started on the review (many thank for this), crossing out where issues are sorted, and adding a small red cross (N) if they are not. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 06:43, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Got it, thanks! Should be complete in a few days. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 16:40, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks for all you are doing. I will be able to catch up on checking your replies tomorrow. Amitchell125 (talk) 20:19, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

Nice, thanks! Should be complete tomorrow or the day after. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 21:05, 20 August 2023

I would add HiWish program to the See also section or within the article, I'll leave it to you to sort. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:21, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Added to See Also. All of the GA related stuff has been dealt with, I believe. The final thing is the cn tag I added, which will probably be completed in a few hours.

About the infobox image, I kind of agree with what both of you said, so how about one of these two images (cropped, if neccessary)? [16] or [17] This image has a background and also contains a slanted view of the orbiter, so it shows more of the spacecraft. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 22:08, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Everything should be done. The sentence with the final cn tag was removed since I couldn't find a source to support it. Regardless, it sounded a bit weird being in the "Timeline" section, and looks more similar to RSL than banded terrain, since banded terrain is suspected to be caused by ice, not liquids. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 02:15, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Cropped versions here: [18] and [19].

(Also, just noticed the first one is the exact same as the original, just with stars and mars. :) ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 02:31, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Passing

I'll give it a double check for small typos and the like, which I'll sort myself, and then then pass. Congratulations! Amitchell125 (talk) 07:40, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Update for Timeline - re attitude monitoring/control

Veteran Mars probe looks to the stars for longevity says the primary inhertial sensor (gyroscopes) was switched off a while ago and the backup has been used, and now 2018 they are testing a software upgrade to avoid relying on the inhertial sensors at all. "The primary system was already switched off a few years ago after it clocked up 58,000 hours of service, and NASA says that the backups have now reached 52,000 hours." Also talks about battery ageing and possible changes to the orbit- Rod57 (talk) 12:21, 12 February 2018 (UTC)

About 5 years late, but I’ve updated the timeline to include this, and some other stuff mentioned in that article. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 03:45, 6 August 2023 (UTC)